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[CA] Gabbro (Edward Cimex)

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New Arrival
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Character Image: waiting to get a Commission
Character Name: Gabbro (Edward Cimex)
Pronoun Choice: he/him
Age: 24
Home Region: Hoenn

Personality Overview: Gabbro is friendly towards most everyone and displays a very casual, laid-back attitude, seeming to be very insightful and perceptive but display a lack of ambition or care for danger, they seem to be a competent and clever builder, explorer and guide.

Five Likes:
Minerals, Outdoors, Lazing about, Adventure, Day Dreaming
Five Dislikes:
Spending to long in crowds, Wasting resources, Pollution, Not having food he likes,

Hobbies:
Mineral Collecting, Pokémon Watching, building Support items, playing flute

Three Strengths:
Insightful: Being able to sit still and just listen has helped him many times, has warned him of incoming danger or even listening to others speak he has discerned lies or what they really were trying to say.​
Craftsman: His innate ability to build and improve on support items, during his early years his father would have him take tours of labs and factories, to have him see if he could envision improvements and new designs. Some of his ideas have become successful items and techniques​
Courageous: His Lack of Fear being as double sided as it is has benefited him in his explorations, Not fearing the unknown or the dangerous has lead him to make many discoveries and successful journeys​
Three Weaknesses:
Laziness: He has had many opportunities to progress him name, him family, his own life but instead he typically chooses to do nothing or only things he enjoys.​
Risk Assessment: Lack of Danger assessment, There have been times where gabbro has put himself and others in danger when the risk far out weighed the reward​
Shirker: His tendency to flight from responsibilities, His family has tried to set him up to be the heir to the businesses and fortunes, but he ran from this. And he continues to avoid anything that would "bind" him to anything he doesn't want to.​

History:
Young Pokémon support company inheritor, avoiding responsibilities by literally running from them. Fled to the island to find peace and avoid his family trying to get him to take up the mantle of new heir to his fathers company and fortune.
 
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X5!

New Arrival
D
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HP
7​
Confidence
7​
Strength
⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘​
Dexterity
⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘​
Vitality
⬤⬤⬤⭘⭘​
Insight
⬤⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘​
Tough
⬤⬤⬤⭘⭘​
Cool
⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘​
Beauty
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Clever
⬤⬤⬤⬤⭘​
Cute
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Brawl
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Throw
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Evasion
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Weapons
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Alert
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Athletic
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Nature
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Stealth
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Allure
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Etiquette
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Intimidate
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Perform
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Crafts
⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘​
Lore
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Medicine
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
Geology
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘​
???
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
???
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
???
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
???
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘​
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Nym

signed an NDA
D
Staff member
Mod
Hi, hello!​

Gabbro's personality looks great, and so do his hobbies, likes, and dislikes! I have a few notes for traits to go over, but they're easy fixes!​
Strengths and Weaknesses:
To help moderators correctly count the traits needed for each section we need you to break each trait up with a defining title and then go into the further definition. I see you're really close to doing this, but it's still not sectioned in a way that helps us note! An example would be:
Insightfulness: Being able to sit still and just listen has helped him many times, has warned him of incoming danger, or even listening to others speak he has discerned lies or what they really were trying to say.
Stats:
Another easy fix! For the Attributes, you assigned 7 points (2 Strength | 1 Dexterity | 2 Vitality | 2 Insight). You'll need to remove a point to get the allotted 6!
Social also only has 5 points (1 Tough | 1 Cool | 3 Clever)! You must have 6 -- you gotta have your characters be a little more adept c;
Skills look good!
Conclusion:
I like Gabbro a lot, there are just some beginner fixes that need to be adjusted in! If you need any help please feel free to DM me directly! Repost Gabbro and edit the title once you're ready for another check.
 

Nym

signed an NDA
D
Staff member
Mod
Good to go!

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[B]Character Image[/B]: waiting to get a Commission
[B]Character Name[/B]: Gabbro (Edward Cimex)
[B]Pronoun Choice[/B]: he/him
[B]Age[/B]: 24
[B]Home Region[/B]:  Hoenn

[B]Personality Overview[/B]:  Gabbro is friendly towards most everyone and displays a very casual, laid-back attitude, seeming to be very insightful and perceptive but display a lack of ambition or care for danger, they seem to be a competent and clever builder, explorer and guide.

[B]Five Likes[/B]:
Minerals, Outdoors, Lazing about, Adventure, Day Dreaming
[B]Five Dislikes[/B]:
Spending to long in crowds, Wasting resources, Pollution, Not having food he likes,

[B]Hobbies[/B]:
Mineral Collecting, Pokémon Watching, building Support items, playing flute

[B]Three Strengths[/B]:
[INDENT][U]Insightful:[/U]  Being able to sit still and just listen has helped him many times, has warned him of incoming danger or even listening to others speak he has discerned lies or what they really were trying to say.[/INDENT]
[INDENT][/INDENT]
[INDENT][U]Craftsman:[/U] His innate ability to build and improve on support items, during his early years his father would have him take tours of labs and factories, to have him see if he could envision improvements and new designs. Some of his ideas have become successful items and techniques[/INDENT]
[INDENT][/INDENT]
[INDENT][U]Courageous:[/U] His Lack of Fear being as double sided as it is has benefited him in his explorations, Not fearing the unknown or the dangerous has lead him to make many discoveries and successful journeys[/INDENT]
[INDENT][/INDENT]
[B]Three Weaknesses[/B]:
[INDENT][U]Laziness:[/U] He has had many opportunities to progress him name, him family, his own life but instead he typically chooses to do nothing or only things he enjoys.[/INDENT]
[INDENT][/INDENT]
[INDENT][U]Risk Assessment:[/U] Lack of Danger assessment, There have been times where gabbro has put himself and others in danger when the risk far out weighed the reward[/INDENT]
[INDENT][/INDENT]
[INDENT][U]Shirker[/U]: His tendency to flight from responsibilities, His family has tried to set him up to be the heir to the businesses and fortunes, but he ran from this. And he continues to avoid anything that would "bind" him to anything he doesn't want to.[/INDENT]

[B]History[/B]:
Young Pokémon support company inheritor, avoiding responsibilities by literally running from them. Fled to the island to find peace and avoid his family trying to get him to take up the mantle of new heir to his fathers company and fortune.
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[TD][CENTER]Confidence
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⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Beauty
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Clever
⬤⬤⬤⬤⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Cute
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]
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[TD][CENTER]Brawl
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Throw
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Evasion
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Weapons
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]
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[TD][CENTER]Alert
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Athletic
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Nature
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Stealth
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
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[TD][CENTER]Allure
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Etiquette
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Intimidate
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Perform
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]Crafts
⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Lore
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Medicine
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]Geology
⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][CENTER]???
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]???
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

[TD][CENTER]???
⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘[/CENTER][/TD]

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