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  1. astralprogenitor

    [CA] Hoshika Raneevee

    🐸 Rano r e m o v e b o i s t e r o u s. As written it's neither positive nor negative and it would belong better condensed into the personality block. XD The other traits are fine though so you're good to go there, although I might recommend renaming Assertive to Overly-Assertive to help...
  2. astralprogenitor

    [CA] Farren Marco

    🐸 Hey hey! First up, we don't allow strengths that are reflected in your stats directly, so "tough" would need to be changed to more of a personality trait since the high VIT and STR stats already show that he's a tough boy. Keen Eye is also questionable, as that's partially demonstrated in...
  3. astralprogenitor

    [CA] Trav Edenburrow

    🐸 Hey there! I think you were gone when the announcement was made, but before I can look at anything else I need you to change the "anxious bean" comments/wordage. :3 I will say though that your stat block definitely looks good so you're great there. Just drop this in help me again once you've...
  4. astralprogenitor

    ⨳ Shiny Roll Thread

    When catching a wild pokémon in an expedition, sometimes, very rarely, they might be a little different than others. Sure, all pokémon have some amount of variety in their colors, but you know what we're really referring to - those weirdly toned critters affectionately referred to as shiny...
  5. astralprogenitor

    [CA] Yamada Tarou

    ------------------------ ------------------------ HP 6 Confidence 9 Strength ⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘ Dexterity ⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘ Vitality ⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘ Insight ⬤⬤⬤⬤⭘ Tough ⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘ Cool ⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘ Beauty ⬤⬤⬤⬤⭘ Clever ⬤⬤⬤⭘⭘ Cute ⬤⭘⭘⭘⭘ Brawl ⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘ Throw ⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘ Evasion ⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘ Weapons ⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘ Alert ⬤⬤⭘⭘⭘ Athletic ⭘⭘⭘⭘⭘...
  6. astralprogenitor

    [CA] Yamada Tarou

    Character Image: Character Name: Yamada Taro Pronoun Choice: he/him Age: 49 Home Region: Johto Personality Overview: Tarou is a blunt sort, too often showing any sort of care only to whatever his focus of the moment is. In the right setting or with the right people, he comes along with a...
  7. astralprogenitor

    [CA] Jun Ito

    🐸 Looking good! Codes for you. 🐸 Character Image: Character Name: Jun Ito Pronoun Choice: He/Him Age: 23 Home Region: Johto Personality Overview: While he seems to always have some sort of answer to something, Jun is far less confident than he actually portrays himself. He's still...
  8. astralprogenitor

    [CA] Hoshika Raneevee

    🐸 Boistrous still has the same problem - it's not written as a strength, it's just a personality trait. Which is a great trait, but it needs a reason why it makes her stronger somehow / benefits her somehow! 🐸
  9. astralprogenitor

    [CA] Cherika Raneevee

    🐸 As written it's still... not a strength. You've written cheeky as -- it really feels like more of an overall personality than a singular Strong Trait. I get what you're going for though - but written as a strength for that you'd be looking at something like ... People person - she loves...
  10. astralprogenitor

    🞿 Training Turn In

    🐸 Codes! 🐸 ------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------- Move Tackle Type Normal Sort PHYSICAL To-Hit DEX+BRAWL Damage STR+2 Accuracy 0 Priority 0 Target Foe Special Effects Nothing...
  11. astralprogenitor

    🞿 Training Turn In

    🐸 New moves for Sunny! 🐸 ------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------- Move Tail Whip Type Normal Sort SUPPORT To-Hit CUTE+PERFORM Damage 0 Accuracy 0 Priority 0 Target All Foes Special Effects Lowers the target's Def by 1...
  12. astralprogenitor

    🞿 Training Turn In

    🐸 X 🐸 New move codes! ------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------- Move Scratch Type Normal Sort PHYSICAL To-Hit DEX+BRAWL Damage STR+2 Accuracy 0 Priority 0 Target Foe Special Effects Nothing...
  13. astralprogenitor

    🞿 Training Turn In

    Brawl cannot have 2 points put into it, as it already has 1 and the max skill rank at Beginner is 2! Please redistribute your points then repost the corrected form. However, I did update + get you your new move codes for when that's done! -------------------------------------------...
  14. astralprogenitor

    🞿 Training Turn In

    ------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------- Move Scratch Type Normal Sort PHYSICAL To-Hit DEX+BRAWL Damage STR+2 Accuracy 0 Priority 0 Target Foe Special Effects Nothing...
  15. astralprogenitor

    🞿 Training Turn In

    ------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------- Move Tackle Type Normal Sort PHYSICAL To-Hit DEX+BRAWL Damage STR+2 Accuracy 0 Priority 0 Target Foe Special Effects Nothing...
  16. astralprogenitor

    🞿 Training Turn In

    🐸 New moves code for you! 🐸 ------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------- Move Scratch Type Normal Sort PHYSICAL To-Hit DEX+BRAWL Damage STR+2 Accuracy 0 Priority 0 Target Foe Special Effects Nothing...
  17. astralprogenitor

    🞿 Training Turn In

    🐸 You cannot put 2 points into brawl as Firewall already has 1, and the max for skills at Beginner rank is 2! Please repost and move that point somewhere else. :3 🐸
  18. astralprogenitor

    (Exploration) Now with more Balls (Lang)[Complete]

    Verifying: -2 pokeball -1 potion 1x lefmew, pokeball 1x credits for completion 1x ura gw for lang
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