@Ruler They all look good, but please post each form in its own post. Nothing wrong with double/triple posting, but it makes cataloguing MUCH easier. XD
@RozeyBear
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@Cheyriddle4
Since your alicorn is the alicorn of thunderstorms, not thunderbirds, powers unfortunately need to relate directly to thunderstorms as-is. As has been the topic of discussion lately, domains are literal - they aren't tangenically related or symbolic or mythological interpretations.
Awareness - Okay, just write this along the lines of "can sense when a thunderstorm is coming / about to form / nearby" and that works fine. Danger sense would not. (Even if it did it would have been a separate power.)
Storm Flight - We don't balance powers based on things like "the pony has to be doing x" or the flavor around it. We need a concrete number - like they can make one large or two medium sized thunder storms a day, etc.
Also, how long they can last and so forth.
Friction - It's fine if it's just a constant effect that they aren't harmed by their own thunderstorms or that they can't be hurt by lightning. Again, we don't balanced based on "pony has to be doing x", so why don't we say they have a natural resistance to lightning formed in any thunderstorm? It would make sense since it's their direct domain.
You're free to frame these however you'd like in RP, but for the thread/shop we have to have concrete values for easy glancing / balancing.
@Valdmir Talamore
Powers look good, please repost the full form for final approval.
@ChexaRain
Missing the Light - A'ight.
Haunt - I get it but that's not a direct relationship imo, considering that you're using haunt in terms of being a shut in and the power deals with creeping up on people. Going to say that as-is this doesn't work.
Leeching - This makes more sense, but I think it would be that he affects ponies directly instead of making the space colder. Despair doesn't make your desk cold, after all, does it? I know this probably seems like a nitpick but it *would* affect RP (ie, he makes YOU cold, but not your latte, yk?).
Further, I think you should take into account the fact that despair affects people differently; having felt both stomach twisting terror / fear of death and complete and utter despair, I can say for
me terror and fear make me feel cold, and despair actually makes me feel hot (and sick). Perhaps more along the lines of your gut-wrenching power, this should make nearby ponies hotter or colder depending on how they would naturally react to despair?
Uncomfortably change their temperature, whichever direction might be appropriate for them.
Shuttering Gaze - nah I think this is fine I just have to ask for clarifications on stuff.
Gut-Wrenching - I didn't realize initially this was on-touch, so I think this is fine, yeah. o vo/
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