@Shaddaling he isssss prettyyyy
Before I judge any of these, I'm going to say that the domain might need to be changed to something like "Magical Symbols" or "Wards" - I don't know if enchantments would be allowed (since magic itself is disallowed) but "symbols" on its own does not have any connotation of what you're aiming for; I would think symbols would relate more towards like, making people understand symbology in things, being able to weave understanding into tales or speak without directly speaking (doublespeak/code speak) and having ponies understand it, etc. You primarily mention wards, so might I legitimately just suggest alicorn of Warding ?
@One Little Jay
Entangle: How durable are the weeds or vines? How deeply can they entangle a pony? If it's something overwhelming (that ponies reasonably can't fight), you'll need a duration for how long he can maintain it per day, at will would be too strong.
Keep Out: How large/deep are the trees, how often can he do it, how big of a space does the wall occupy, are the trees just normal trees or are they magically strengthened?
Plant Growth: How large of an area can he grow, given the restriction on how often you've put down.
Speak with Forests: Plants do not have intelligence unless they are very special magical plants, and thus cannot be spoken with. Animals are iffy on whether or not that would be allowed; as dicussed elsewhere, most animals are only of animal intellect and can't actually speak or hold a conversation. I think a better replacement for this would be simply understanding the state of the forest - for instance, knowing where there is a patch of death happening in the forest and why, what's causing trees to die, are populations of critters being overhunted, etc.
Commune: How often does the trance last, how often can he do it.
Transport: Mmm. I feel like this could potentially work but only within a single continuous forest, sort of traveling 'through' the trees. Most trees in singular forests are actually interconnected (roots and fungal connections bind them) so it'd be like stepping through the forest (forest walk!). However, stepping through a tree on one part of the world into another somewhere else doesn't really fit with the domain, I think, as forests aren't really known for their teleportation skills. ;D What about being able to literally travel through all plants in one continuous forest - even if he's never actually been to another part of the forest - as part of a sort of extension of commune with forests?
@SwordOfTheNagas
Interface is a bit powerful for awakened, that would be alicorn territory. I think being able to connect with their computer to experience it in a sort of VR way would be fine, but the guaranteed hacking and deep delving is a no go.
Static Aura - how does it affect electronics?
Also please repost Poison, I don't like digging through old posts and trying to find edits. x'D
@Hattaki
Inattention/Emotional Liability - How far around does this aura affect ponies? How long do the effects last once they're out of it?
Then Suffer As I - how often can he inflict delirium (basically what he's doing ik XD), how long does it last? If it varies by how long, what's the minimum / maximum time it can last and how does that affect how often it can be done?
@belloblossom
Heart's Desire - This power is fine as an on-touch - ie, he can activate it then fly far away, it doesn't need the radius! It also doesn't HAVE to have maintained contact if you don't want. However! I do need to know how often he can do this!
Prestidigitation - How far away from himself can he make these little tricks? It's fine as an at-will/unlimited power apart from a distance.
Wake Up Call - It's fine if he knows, but dispelling is an opposite power that would be more fitting under something like Clarity! Hallucination cannot dismiss itself.
@Bluedemonwolf
Memories
Memory refresher - is it stronger when she does it on purpose? If so, how? How often can she do it on purpose if it IS stronger?
Memory return - how often can she do this, and I'm assuming she needs to mindscape or at least be aware of the memory first in order to do it?
Memory share - does not make sense for it to fade from the pony it didn't originate from, as they've now experienced that, so I would remove that part. You can keep it in showing on her markings if you really want to, though you could also just. make it a group projection ability if desired. Either way, I need to know how often she can do this.
Photographic memory - having a photographic memory is fine, the other parts aren't really part of the power. You don't need to balance your powers for listing, though I think it's a good touch for them!
Forgetfulness
Mindscape - I don't know that this one will work for her? Because she isn't an alicorn of memories, I'm not sure why she'd have the ability to browse memories. She could have ponies forget things if she knew the memory existed - perhaps with her sister sharing memories with her - but delving into them does not fit with this domain.
Memory Haze - same questions as memory refresher above
Memory Wipe - What kind of consequences would it have on her? In addition, baring in mind what I said earlier (about it not making sense for false memories to fade once shared), could she also erase memories shared with -other- ponies?
I get that you're trying to make them mirrors of each other, mind you, but we don't do opposite powers anymore (which is why the memories fading naturally doesn't really fit), and while it's their
choice not to use powers on others, typically it isn't sensible for a power to be linked to only one pony! o vo
