@SwordOfTheNagas
How long does Don't Get Close last once he leaves the area? I didn't understand the power last time so I couldn't properly ask. Edit that in and repost and you should be good to go.
Purification:
just a tap - how often can she do this, and does that mean that she can give an object her purifying powers? That is, could she enchant a stone to be able to purify things? If so those would need to be two separate powers (which you have room for, so no problem) - one for being able to concentrate her powers at touch, one for being able to enchant an item to purify for her
with a song - how often can she do this, as it's pretty powerful - also a bit stretching the definition, but I like it!
purifying wave - what defines 'negative energies'? I'm cool with working with you for with a song as you could argue negative thoughts are 'tainting' or 'poisonous,' for sure, but I need more clarification here on what this covers as it needs to be things that can be
purified, not just any blanket bad thing. Also, how far around her does it affect?
@belloblossom
for hallucinations, I think that's fine. Can you edit those in and repost the full power sheet?
piracy:
This all seems fine except thar be treasure - do they need to KNOW what treasure exists, or do they just have a sense of where the 'nearest' treasure would be? is treasure defined specifically as 'hidden things of monetary value' or just 'things of monetary value that we could steal also' XD
also: I am suggesting using the domain
Pirates instead of
Piracy as your powers relate directly to being a pirate, vs piracy itself (which is more aligned towards specifically robbing, stealing, hijacking, or also cracking and using illegal software). I can def approve your powers for the domain of Pirates after that small clarification, not so much for Piracy.
@One Little Jay
I think those should work, you can edit in and repost!
@Shaddaling
Reagents - does he create them from thin air or does he just have the power to enchant any materials to work for him?
for the others, how often can he make the enchantments? how long do they typically last? The powers themselves seem fine power wise! I just gotta have durations and uses per day/time period. o vo
@I--LiveWire--I
vibration sense - since this relies specifically on vibrations, can he only see living creatures/organisms? as I would imagine if he can detect
molecular level vibrations he would very quickly go insane from the entire world vibrating around him all the time. in which case, does that mean that stillness makes his sight less effective (if not entirely blind depending on the size of the organism, since internal organs still clearly function and move)
indomitable will - how far does it reduce it? does it reduce alicorn effects, or only typical magical effects? are they halfed, quartered, etc
shadow meld - as an awakened I feel like he needs a limit on how often he can do this per day
shadow reach - 4 yards / 5x daily seems a bit strong for awakened and not alicorn, how about 1 yard (that is three feet after all) and 2x daily?
@RozeyBear
Reve:
soothing touch - how long is an 'extended' period? how fully does this power soothe? does it ever stop activating? a constant power like that feels a bit strong for an awakened without specific boundaries :3
comfort zone - how long can he do this at one time, how many times a day
Rusalka:
since these powers don't really affect other ponies in any meaningful/needs to be power-balanced way I'll say she's fine and approved.
Peppermint Quartz:
same as above, so approved~
@bitsie spider
Due to the possibly religious connotation, I'm letting you know that I'm not going to look at your powers until I've talked with Nym about the domain itself. It's not death itself, but it's very heavily related. :3
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